Re: Court Claim Help Please - Natwest / Irwin Mitchell
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Originally posted by R B 1968
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And this is my 'first draft' (defence only) with private details replaced with *'s:
case/claim No: 9QR*****
In the Northampton County Court
DEFENCE
Note re Mrs and it being joint account and that Mrs has agreed for you to represent both your interest in this matter in accordance with accompanying letter to Court. Which we will also prepare.
All allegations made in the particulars of claim are denied unless specifically admitted in this defence.
1: The Defendantshad a personal bank account, account number ******** hereinafter referred to as “the Account”, maintained at the Claimant's ****** **** Branch sort code**-**-**
2: The Account, at the time of the claim, is in debit by £4***.**
3: The Defendants dispute the amount of £4***.** in full, it being made up of unauthorised transaction charges and debit interest and subsequent charges on the same. The Defendants aver that the charges are not intended to represent and are disproportionate to any alleged actual loss, in respect of any breaches of contract on the part of the Defendants, but instead unduly enrich the Claimant and therefore are not owed to the Claimant as claimed. It is the defendants contention that these charges are unfair under The Unfair Terms in Consumer Contracts Regulation 1999 SCHEDULE 2 Indicative and Non-Exhaustive List of terms which may be regarded as unfair (e) Requiring any consumer who fails to fulfill his obligation to pay a disproportionately high sum in compensation .
4: If the Claimant avers that these charges are reasonable, fair and proportionate, then the Claimant should reasonably be able to disclose evidence of their actual losses in relation to contractual breaches by the Defendants.
5: The Defendants have been in communication with the Claimant regarding the disputed amount. See Appendix 1a for copies of letters sent to the Claimant on ****t March 2008 , acknowledged by the Claimant on ***h April 2008, Appendix 2a and see Appendix 3a for copies of letters sent to the Claimant on **** July 2009, acknowledged by the Claimant on **** August 2009, Appendix 4a : The Defendants enter a counter claim for the full balance of the account and additional amounts as detailed on the schedule of charges in Appendix 5A,
6: We will add in a paragraph or two regarding request under cpr 31:14 request and invite Judge to dismiss the Claimants claim owing to their failure to provide the reqested douments in support of their claim against you. Copy of CPR 31.14 request wiill be appendix 6
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Fingers crossed this looks OK ?
Need to consider my Appendixes now - I have all 4 letters but, again, the figures won't tally up if I use your figures, Budgie ? See my previous post
Thank you,
R
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Sorry Budgie our last posts appear to have passed in the night !
Can you suggest any re-wording to explain the discrepancies ?
I know 1a.2a,3a and 4a will be my letters but what about Appendix 5a - will this be your re-calculation of my charges ? Yes will be two spreadsheets which will also be referred to in the counterclaim
Thanks again,
R
case/claim No: 9QR*****
In the Northampton County Court
NATIONAL WESTMINSTER BANK PLC
CLAIMANT
-AND-
MRS *************willchange this to you rather than Mrs and add note in defence
DEFENDANT
CLAIMANT
-AND-
MRS *************willchange this to you rather than Mrs and add note in defence
DEFENDANT
DEFENCE
Note re Mrs and it being joint account and that Mrs has agreed for you to represent both your interest in this matter in accordance with accompanying letter to Court. Which we will also prepare.
All allegations made in the particulars of claim are denied unless specifically admitted in this defence.
1: The Defendantshad a personal bank account, account number ******** hereinafter referred to as “the Account”, maintained at the Claimant's ****** **** Branch sort code**-**-**
2: The Account, at the time of the claim, is in debit by £4***.**
3: The Defendants dispute the amount of £4***.** in full, it being made up of unauthorised transaction charges and debit interest and subsequent charges on the same. The Defendants aver that the charges are not intended to represent and are disproportionate to any alleged actual loss, in respect of any breaches of contract on the part of the Defendants, but instead unduly enrich the Claimant and therefore are not owed to the Claimant as claimed. It is the defendants contention that these charges are unfair under The Unfair Terms in Consumer Contracts Regulation 1999 SCHEDULE 2 Indicative and Non-Exhaustive List of terms which may be regarded as unfair (e) Requiring any consumer who fails to fulfill his obligation to pay a disproportionately high sum in compensation .
4: If the Claimant avers that these charges are reasonable, fair and proportionate, then the Claimant should reasonably be able to disclose evidence of their actual losses in relation to contractual breaches by the Defendants.
5: The Defendants have been in communication with the Claimant regarding the disputed amount. See Appendix 1a for copies of letters sent to the Claimant on ****t March 2008 , acknowledged by the Claimant on ***h April 2008, Appendix 2a and see Appendix 3a for copies of letters sent to the Claimant on **** July 2009, acknowledged by the Claimant on **** August 2009, Appendix 4a : The Defendants enter a counter claim for the full balance of the account and additional amounts as detailed on the schedule of charges in Appendix 5A,
6: We will add in a paragraph or two regarding request under cpr 31:14 request and invite Judge to dismiss the Claimants claim owing to their failure to provide the reqested douments in support of their claim against you. Copy of CPR 31.14 request wiill be appendix 6
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Fingers crossed this looks OK ?
Need to consider my Appendixes now - I have all 4 letters but, again, the figures won't tally up if I use your figures, Budgie ? See my previous post
Thank you,
R
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Sorry Budgie our last posts appear to have passed in the night !
Can you suggest any re-wording to explain the discrepancies ?
I know 1a.2a,3a and 4a will be my letters but what about Appendix 5a - will this be your re-calculation of my charges ? Yes will be two spreadsheets which will also be referred to in the counterclaim
Thanks again,
R
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