Looks ok for what it is in the time given. If you're happy get it submitted but you will need to do that by email to the courts as you won't be able to fit that in the defence box online due to a restricted character limit.
The email address is ccbc@justice.gov.uk and make sure to have the following in the subject line:
Filing of Defence - [claimant name] v [defendant name] (Claim No. XXXXXX)
The email address is ccbc@justice.gov.uk and make sure to have the following in the subject line:
Filing of Defence - [claimant name] v [defendant name] (Claim No. XXXXXX)
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