Re: Do I have a case here?
I would suggest the following changes (numbers refer to your paragraphs):
Para 1. I [name] of [address] am the claimant in this claim. The facts in this statement come from my own personal knowledge.
Para 8. is hearsay and not something you know from your own knowledge. Rephrase it to "on dd/mm/yyyy mr ? of the framers informed me that on 05 September 2017 D had ......"
Para 9 list individual calls by date and content if you have the details. If not amend to "I made a number of calls to.the number listed ....."
para 10 should be split into two paras. One records receipt of defence (no need to include it as exhibit as the court already have a copy), Other para records receipt of email dated dd/mm from D
Para 12, omit as there is no need to summarise what you have done
Paras 13 & 14 may be omitted as it is not necessary to quote the relevant acts (but have your own copy handy in court just in case!)
Dates should be expressed thus 05 September 2014
Rather than a plain statement from the framers, obtain a statement in the same form as your WS
I would suggest the following changes (numbers refer to your paragraphs):
Para 1. I [name] of [address] am the claimant in this claim. The facts in this statement come from my own personal knowledge.
Para 8. is hearsay and not something you know from your own knowledge. Rephrase it to "on dd/mm/yyyy mr ? of the framers informed me that on 05 September 2017 D had ......"
Para 9 list individual calls by date and content if you have the details. If not amend to "I made a number of calls to.the number listed ....."
para 10 should be split into two paras. One records receipt of defence (no need to include it as exhibit as the court already have a copy), Other para records receipt of email dated dd/mm from D
Para 12, omit as there is no need to summarise what you have done
Paras 13 & 14 may be omitted as it is not necessary to quote the relevant acts (but have your own copy handy in court just in case!)
Dates should be expressed thus 05 September 2014
Rather than a plain statement from the framers, obtain a statement in the same form as your WS
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