[MENTION=5354]mystery1[/MENTION]
Hi, I was reading this thread and I appear to be in the same position as fandaz. I have received a PCN from the same row of shops. I have appealed using a template letter from our friend Martin Lewis which I adapted to suit the circumstances. It was rejected by NPE, no surprise there. I have received I popla code so I would like to know what the best thing to do is to increase the chances of winning at the popla appeals stage please? I've posted all the correspondence below. I have not included all the ref numbers and personal details as I'm sure this slime ball will be reading this.
I have yesterday received a PCN "final demand" from yourselves. Saying that "this PCN has not been paid and the opportunity to pay a discounted amount has been lost" I will categorically and honestly say that this is the first correspondence I have had on this matter. How can it be a "final demand"and how can I "have lost an opportunity to pay a discounted rate" if this is the first I have heard about the matter? I'm presuming there has been some sort of communication attempted prior to this one, in which I did not receive.
That being said, I challenge this 'PCN' as keeper of the car, on these main grounds:
a). The sum is disproportionate, does not represent a genuine pre-estimate of loss, nor is it a core price term. Especially as at the time (9:58pm) this was "issued" the business in question was closed to customers.
b) The sum is extravagant and unconscionable and cannot be justified. As the ParkingEye v Beavis case is pending a hearing at the Supreme Court, your position is effectively likely to be stayed until 2016 if you try to pursue this matter so I invite you to cancel the PCN now.
c). There is no evidence that you have any proprietary interest in the land. I will complain to the landowner about your aggressive ticketing model.
d). Your 'Notice' fails to comply with the POFA 2012 and breaches various consumer contract/unfair terms Regulations.
e). As keeper I believe that the signs were not seen, at 9:58pm it was dark and there was no adequate lighting, the wording is ambiguous and the predominant purpose of your business model is to deter.
The purpose of this communication is:
1. Formal challenge
There will be no admissions as to who was driving and no assumptions can be drawn. As such, you must either rely on the POFA 2012 or cancel the charge. I suggest you uphold this challenge now or alternatively, send a rejection letter and I will only appeal further if you offer POPLA, which is the only ADR with a scrutiny panel where it is seen to be independent. Any other alternative will not be considered.
2. ''Drop hands'' offer
The extravagant 'parking charge' is baseless but I realise that you may have incurred nominal postage costs. Equally, I have incurred costs to date, for responding to your junk mail dressed up to impersonate a parking ticket. It is clear that my costs and yours, at this point, do not exceed £15. Therefore, this is a formal “drop hands”offer. I remind you of the duty to mitigate any loss, so withdraw the spurious charge within 35 days without further expense and I will not pursue you for my costs.
3. Notice of cancellation of contract
I hereby give notice of withdrawal from this alleged 'contract' which was never properly offered by you and certainly was not expressly agreed. This 'contract' is hereby cancelled and any obligations now end. The Consumer Contracts (Information, Cancellation & Additional Payments) Regulations apply now to every consumer contract. You have failed to meet the statutory requirements for information served in advance by durable medium.
I have kept proof of submission of this challenge. I look forward to your considered reply within 35 days.
Yours faithfully
Thank you for your letter of appeal against the above parking charge notice issued to you on 18th April 2015 at 21.58pm for reason ‘Unauthorised Parking’ at ’Norwich In Car Entertainment, 47 Dereham Road, Norwich’.
Having carefully considered the evidence provided by you we have decided to reject your appeal for the following reasons:
1- The above location is private property and there are advertised terms and conditions which the driver is expected to abide by in order to obtain permission to park.
2- The signage clearly states that parking is not permitted for KFC or when the business is closed.
3- The spaces at this location are reserved when the business is closed for vehicles that have been authorised and added to our exempt list. As your vehicle is not on that list it was correctly issued a parking charge.
Registered office. The Studio, St. Nicholas Close, Elstree, Hertfordshire WD6 3EW Tel 0330 0080371 office address: PO Box 244, Wymondham, Norfolk, NR18 8BZ
email - office@parkingprotection.co.uk company registration no. 08031075
As confirmed by the recent dismissal of the ParkingEye v Beavis appeal, we submit that the
charge does not cause a significant imbalance of the parties' rights and obligations arising
under the Contract. The charge sought is a contractual term, which is within the
recommended British Parking Association (BPA) guidelines, and is compliant with paragraph
19.5 of the BPA code. Furthermore, the BPA has authorised us to charge at this level.
4-
5- As the ParkingEye v Beavis has been won at both County Court and Court of Appeal, we are happy to await the Supreme Court hearing outcome should POPLA stay your appeal.
6- The signage in this car park has been audited and approved by the British Parking Association.
7- Norfolk Parking Enforcement have a contract with the landowner giving us sole responsibility to issue parking charges to vehicles that have parked outside of the advertised terms and conditions and pursue payment for any unpaid charges in our name through court if necessary. Please do complain to them, we are sure they will be interested as to why you feel aggrieved for us managing their private parking spaces correctly by issuing charges to vehicles that have parked outside their terms and conditions.
www.parkingprotection.co.uk
You now have a number of options:
1- Pay the Parking Charge Notice at the prevailing price of £60.00 within 14 days. Please note
that after this time the Parking Charge Notice will rise to £100.00.
2- Make an appeal to POPLA – The Independent Appeals Service, within 28 days from date of
this letter. Please be advised that if you opt for independent arbitration of your case you will lose the right to the discounted rate of £60.00, and should POPLA’s decision not go in your favour, you will be required to pay the full amount of £100.00. If you opt to pay the reduced amount of £60.00 you will not be able to apply to POPLA. Appeals to POPLA can be made by post to: POPLA, PO Box 70748, London, EC1P 1SN, or by email to: www.popla.org.uk, quoting the verification number above. POPLA’s Enquiries telephone number is: 0845 207 7700.
3- If you choose to do nothing, we will seek to recover the monies owed to us via our debt recovery procedures and may proceed with court action against you.
Regards
NPE Appeals Dept
[MENTION=5354]mystery1[/MENTION]
My main issues are:
1it was 9:58pm in April and was dark, there are no lights to illuminate the signs.
2 due to the time of day the business in question is closed, how can £100 or even £60 be "proportionate or commercially justifiable" (I've been reading the bpa code of practice)
3. The signs are not clear unless you actually walk up to them and read them like a long winded novel. (But this guy says they have been "audited by the bpa")
4 even if the were lit up the signs are the same colour as the shops signage so therefore blend in with the scenery. Unless you know the are there they are so easy to miss.
5. 2 shops to the left of the shop in question they have installed removable barriers which are up at night to prevent people parking and down during the day to allow the customers to park. Why hasn't this shop done that? I know, because they want people to park there so they can cash in I bet.
Anyway your help in advising on what to write to popla would be appreciated on this matter. Thanks
Rob
Hi, I was reading this thread and I appear to be in the same position as fandaz. I have received a PCN from the same row of shops. I have appealed using a template letter from our friend Martin Lewis which I adapted to suit the circumstances. It was rejected by NPE, no surprise there. I have received I popla code so I would like to know what the best thing to do is to increase the chances of winning at the popla appeals stage please? I've posted all the correspondence below. I have not included all the ref numbers and personal details as I'm sure this slime ball will be reading this.
I have yesterday received a PCN "final demand" from yourselves. Saying that "this PCN has not been paid and the opportunity to pay a discounted amount has been lost" I will categorically and honestly say that this is the first correspondence I have had on this matter. How can it be a "final demand"and how can I "have lost an opportunity to pay a discounted rate" if this is the first I have heard about the matter? I'm presuming there has been some sort of communication attempted prior to this one, in which I did not receive.
That being said, I challenge this 'PCN' as keeper of the car, on these main grounds:
a). The sum is disproportionate, does not represent a genuine pre-estimate of loss, nor is it a core price term. Especially as at the time (9:58pm) this was "issued" the business in question was closed to customers.
b) The sum is extravagant and unconscionable and cannot be justified. As the ParkingEye v Beavis case is pending a hearing at the Supreme Court, your position is effectively likely to be stayed until 2016 if you try to pursue this matter so I invite you to cancel the PCN now.
c). There is no evidence that you have any proprietary interest in the land. I will complain to the landowner about your aggressive ticketing model.
d). Your 'Notice' fails to comply with the POFA 2012 and breaches various consumer contract/unfair terms Regulations.
e). As keeper I believe that the signs were not seen, at 9:58pm it was dark and there was no adequate lighting, the wording is ambiguous and the predominant purpose of your business model is to deter.
The purpose of this communication is:
1. Formal challenge
There will be no admissions as to who was driving and no assumptions can be drawn. As such, you must either rely on the POFA 2012 or cancel the charge. I suggest you uphold this challenge now or alternatively, send a rejection letter and I will only appeal further if you offer POPLA, which is the only ADR with a scrutiny panel where it is seen to be independent. Any other alternative will not be considered.
2. ''Drop hands'' offer
The extravagant 'parking charge' is baseless but I realise that you may have incurred nominal postage costs. Equally, I have incurred costs to date, for responding to your junk mail dressed up to impersonate a parking ticket. It is clear that my costs and yours, at this point, do not exceed £15. Therefore, this is a formal “drop hands”offer. I remind you of the duty to mitigate any loss, so withdraw the spurious charge within 35 days without further expense and I will not pursue you for my costs.
3. Notice of cancellation of contract
I hereby give notice of withdrawal from this alleged 'contract' which was never properly offered by you and certainly was not expressly agreed. This 'contract' is hereby cancelled and any obligations now end. The Consumer Contracts (Information, Cancellation & Additional Payments) Regulations apply now to every consumer contract. You have failed to meet the statutory requirements for information served in advance by durable medium.
I have kept proof of submission of this challenge. I look forward to your considered reply within 35 days.
Yours faithfully
Thank you for your letter of appeal against the above parking charge notice issued to you on 18th April 2015 at 21.58pm for reason ‘Unauthorised Parking’ at ’Norwich In Car Entertainment, 47 Dereham Road, Norwich’.
Having carefully considered the evidence provided by you we have decided to reject your appeal for the following reasons:
1- The above location is private property and there are advertised terms and conditions which the driver is expected to abide by in order to obtain permission to park.
2- The signage clearly states that parking is not permitted for KFC or when the business is closed.
3- The spaces at this location are reserved when the business is closed for vehicles that have been authorised and added to our exempt list. As your vehicle is not on that list it was correctly issued a parking charge.
Registered office. The Studio, St. Nicholas Close, Elstree, Hertfordshire WD6 3EW Tel 0330 0080371 office address: PO Box 244, Wymondham, Norfolk, NR18 8BZ
email - office@parkingprotection.co.uk company registration no. 08031075
As confirmed by the recent dismissal of the ParkingEye v Beavis appeal, we submit that the
charge does not cause a significant imbalance of the parties' rights and obligations arising
under the Contract. The charge sought is a contractual term, which is within the
recommended British Parking Association (BPA) guidelines, and is compliant with paragraph
19.5 of the BPA code. Furthermore, the BPA has authorised us to charge at this level.
4-
5- As the ParkingEye v Beavis has been won at both County Court and Court of Appeal, we are happy to await the Supreme Court hearing outcome should POPLA stay your appeal.
6- The signage in this car park has been audited and approved by the British Parking Association.
7- Norfolk Parking Enforcement have a contract with the landowner giving us sole responsibility to issue parking charges to vehicles that have parked outside of the advertised terms and conditions and pursue payment for any unpaid charges in our name through court if necessary. Please do complain to them, we are sure they will be interested as to why you feel aggrieved for us managing their private parking spaces correctly by issuing charges to vehicles that have parked outside their terms and conditions.
www.parkingprotection.co.uk
You now have a number of options:
1- Pay the Parking Charge Notice at the prevailing price of £60.00 within 14 days. Please note
that after this time the Parking Charge Notice will rise to £100.00.
2- Make an appeal to POPLA – The Independent Appeals Service, within 28 days from date of
this letter. Please be advised that if you opt for independent arbitration of your case you will lose the right to the discounted rate of £60.00, and should POPLA’s decision not go in your favour, you will be required to pay the full amount of £100.00. If you opt to pay the reduced amount of £60.00 you will not be able to apply to POPLA. Appeals to POPLA can be made by post to: POPLA, PO Box 70748, London, EC1P 1SN, or by email to: www.popla.org.uk, quoting the verification number above. POPLA’s Enquiries telephone number is: 0845 207 7700.
3- If you choose to do nothing, we will seek to recover the monies owed to us via our debt recovery procedures and may proceed with court action against you.
Regards
NPE Appeals Dept
[MENTION=5354]mystery1[/MENTION]
My main issues are:
1it was 9:58pm in April and was dark, there are no lights to illuminate the signs.
2 due to the time of day the business in question is closed, how can £100 or even £60 be "proportionate or commercially justifiable" (I've been reading the bpa code of practice)
3. The signs are not clear unless you actually walk up to them and read them like a long winded novel. (But this guy says they have been "audited by the bpa")
4 even if the were lit up the signs are the same colour as the shops signage so therefore blend in with the scenery. Unless you know the are there they are so easy to miss.
5. 2 shops to the left of the shop in question they have installed removable barriers which are up at night to prevent people parking and down during the day to allow the customers to park. Why hasn't this shop done that? I know, because they want people to park there so they can cash in I bet.
Anyway your help in advising on what to write to popla would be appreciated on this matter. Thanks
Rob
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