draught of popla appeal for appraisal please

[uncle ernie]

Hi guys,it would be most appreciated if someone could have a look at my appeal letter and original pcn to see if it's ok to send
or if i have missed anything
cheers
https://www.dropbox.com/s/dqbehtqweh...pcs.1.pdf?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/kmetto9dixkv1vc/pcs2.pdf?dl=0
appeal
https://www.dropbox.com/s/drrqvcfarp...ument.txt?dl=0

[uncle ernie]

Hi guys,it would be most appreciated if someone could have a look at my appeal letter and original pcn to see if it's ok
or if i have missed anything
cheers
https://www.dropbox.com/s/dqbehtqweh...pcs.1.pdf?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/kmetto9dixkv1vc/pcs2.pdf?dl=0
appeal
https://www.dropbox.com/s/drrqvcfarp...ument.txt?dl=0

help still needed

[ostell]

9 (5) should be 9 (4). 9 (4) is the requirement, 9 (5) is the definition

Tidy up the POFA fail bits, there is no flow between the sections and the definitions

The failures are:

• The notice was served outside the relevant period, contrary to the requirements of 9 (5)
• There is no period of parking as required by 9 (2) (a)
• There is no warning of keeper liability as required by 9 (2) (f)

[uncle ernie]

thanks for the pointers ostell,job done hopefully,added more details and changed some spacing too to tidy it up
hope this is ok now

https://paper.dropbox.com/doc/95tHyz...Sr6HE?cl=en_US